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It is true that an increase in the population
of cities has caused a multitude of problems in modern society. There
are several problems led by overpopulation and I believe that these problems
can be tackled by government policies and individual efforts.
The main problem caused by a growing population is an
increase in housing costs. An increase in population leads to a rise in demand for
apartments, resulting in an increase (벌써 네 번째 increase 인데, 이렇게 많이 반복되면 조금 곤란합니다.) in the price of the apartments. This would
necessarily expand the gap between the rich who have an apartment and the poor
who do not have the property. Another problem would be issues regarding traffic
congestion and the environmental problem made by it. Using The use of private cars would
increase more and more due to the growing population, leading to traffic jams on
the roads. In addition, CO2 emissions from vehicles damage the ozone layer protecting
the climate of our planet. It is undeniable that this problem would be a major
risk on the earth.
These problems can be tackled by government policies and
individual efforts. To begin, governments should be largely responsible for
these problems. They should expand the supply of apartments to prevent an
increase in housing costs. Also, they should enforce the law prohibiting speculation
in real estate. To alleviate traffic jams, they should enlarge public
transportation like the subway system in the city area. Furthermore, they can encourage
people to move to the countryside by building universities,hospitals and
convenient facilities outside the city. Next, the individuals should refrain
from using their own private car considering the environmental problems. (너무 정부 쪽에 치우쳐있는데, 이를 조금만 줄이고 개인의 비중도 늘러주시면 좋습니다. 분명 서/결론에서 둘 모두의 역할이 필요하다고 하셨으니까요.)
In conclusion, there are problems such as an increase in
housing costs and traffic jams which are led by overpopulation and I believe
that these problems can be solved by government policies and individual
efforts. (이전 글과 마찬가지로, 어떤 노력인지 대략이나마 적어주세요.)
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