Write a letter to the local school in your neighborhood to give suggestions about improving its buildings and play area. Include
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Why they should be improved
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Suggestions for how
- When they could be improved
Dear sir or madam,
I hope you find this well. I’m writing to suggest regarding some buildings in your school. I would like you to know some parts of the school buildings have to be renovated.
There are several reasons why they should be changed. Firstly, the library and the gym in our school are quite old compared to other facilities and their painting peeled off and cracks are visible in many parts. Secondly, our playground has been built long time ago and there are many other people who are not students using our playground, so it should be bigger than now to give our children better educational environment.
I would like to give you some details of how they can be improved. For peeling-off buildings, we can hire a couple of painters to paint the wall and cracks. Also, it would be a good idea if we can ask people who use our school facility to donate for remodeling.
I assume that these measures can take more than 1 month but when it comes to painting the old buildings, it could be just 1 week to be taken.
I hope you consider this seriously and take actions for it. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Victoria Kim