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There are many abandoned buildings in cities today. In this regard, it is often argued that they and their history should be preserved. However, some people think that its space should be used (혹은 기타 다른 표현을 dhll님 판단에 맞게 넣어주셔도 됩니다. 대신 뭐가 됐든 꼭 하나는 넣어주세요!) for new architectures. I also agree with them, and this essay, I will discuss the reasons in detail.
Cities are always busy, and too many crowds often become a major problem of it. The problem can sometimes be more serious especially when there are many buildings around that no one visits. Because of them, people only visit popular places, and the population is unbalanced. In order to avoid this from happening, the government should use their money to replace them with another with a better meaning to visitors.
Also, especially today, buildings are considered to be valuable when they adopt modern technologies inside them. For example, even historical museums give up on insisting their thoughts on their initial concepts of them and attempt to be more futuristic. This is because they believe that in this that way, they can attract more visitors. The change they make will benefit not just themselves but also the cities where they stand.
In conclusion, the government should spend money on changing buildings (그냥 빌딩이 아닌, old building 으로 한정지어주셔야 합니다. old가 들어가지 않을 경우 의미가 전혀 달라지므로 주의해주세요!) to new and better ones. This is because it can benefit more people and their city. |