Your Answer ▼ The trend of the rapid increase in car ownership which that a number of car results in more traffic jams than before in the world, has caused some issues today. I believe that the trend totally is true. This issue is also accompanied by some other problems. This essay will discuss more examples of these issues before presenting some solutions.
The problems we can expect is that human and animals animials suffer from global warming, for many cars emit exhaust gases. For instance, as global warming destroys the destory natural environment, wild animals lose their habitats and they also have difficulties in finding preys. Therefore they will end up becoming extinct. Another fearful result is that increasing cars are responsible for human's death. To be specify, climatic condition is ever-changing recently. This situation situration brings about traffic accidents and congestions. If people feel discomfort and they decide to use cars due to weather, traffic problems will increase more and more.
Then, There there are several ways to this (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 작성되지 않도록 해주세요~) but the most important thing is that the governments should encourage people to use bikes which less emit exhaust gases. The nation Nations need to extend more bike roads and public bike rental stations. Moreover, the state have has to impose environmental fees on car users when weather go bad. (날씨가 아니라 '대기가 좋지 않아졌을 때' 라고 해주셔야 맞지 않을까요?) Each individual should keep people keep in mind about the significance of environment and life.
To conclude, from the above, in other to control the issue mentioned in previous paragrah (여기도 마찬가지입니다. 이게 뭔지에 대해 다시 한번 짧게 상기시켜주세요.), it seems vital for individuals and state to combine their efforts and share the responsibility with the (due to 는 ~때문에의 의미입니다.) due to extension of bike system and einvironmental fees.
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