Your Answer ▼ Undoubtedly, people's activities nowadays are recorded growingly through cell phones and security cameras, which results in technology development. There are some people saying that in In most cases, recording by using them is practiced without people's agreement. I believe that the situation will represent more serious disadvantages than advantages in the society. The main reason that supports my views is that people can invade other's privacy with cell phones because capturing images silently is easy with the use of cell phones the use of them is easy to capturing images silently. There are increased cases of people taking photos with a concealed cell phone and uploading them on the Internet increasing some cases that they gain photos with concealed cell phone camera and often updated on the Internet. The photos which include bodies of other people body part without permission can give mainly many victims depression or mood swing, which may lead to the commission of suicide causes to have decisions on suicide. As a result, development of the cell phone will lead to threaten our lifes. (핸드폰의 발달 자체가 논점이라기보다는, 핸드폰의 발달에 따른 카메라 등이 논점인데, 이를 떠나서 이 문단 전체가 수정이 필요하므로, 자세한 건 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다. 우선은 그냥 문법 체크상 수정해드렸습니다.)
Another important reason is that security cameras have been depriving of freedom. This is because although people do not commit criminals, they are always monitored. To be specific, if they are recorded by camera at the workplace, they feel pressured. People today think that independence plays a crucial role working such as voluntary commute. (이 문장은 의도하신 바에 대해 댓글 한번 주세요!) When they are obsessed with strict work environment, their work efficiency will reduce. Therefore, unlimited security camera use is not suitable for modern society and will be an obstacle of technology advance.
To conclude, from the above factors, I can assume that monitoring through technological devices have various different disadvatage disadvantages due to the fact that technology development have harmful effects on our life and working environment.
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