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The graph illustrates how the number of female and male university
graduates had changed in Canada from 1992 to 2007.
Overall, the number of both females and males had increased
significantly during 15 years, while there had been more females than males
continuously.
Firstly, there were around 100,000 women who graduated
universities in 1992, which had increased by about 5,000 more by 1995. Then the
number of female graduates had started to drop back to 100,000 in 1997 when it
began to increase again rapidly. The number reached about 150,000 in 2007,
which is one and a half times greater amount of people. (무엇과 비교해서 1.5배 증가인지를 명시해주세요~)
Meanwhile, the number of male graduates had been always less
then female. However, it shows the same changes of the number. (단순히 '같은 변화' 라고만 적기에는 너무 흐릿합니다. '같은 트렌드의 변화' '같은 흐름의 변화' 등으로 구체화해주세요!) The number of
men who graduated universities was 70,000 in 1992, which has increased almost up
to 80,000 which started to decrease in 1995 as the number of female graduates
did. The number started to increase again from 70,000 men in 1998 which
eventually reached around 95,000 in 2007. |