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It is true that a majority of educational facilities such as school and academy tend to provide courses which are gear to learn a science and ignore artistic subjects. Although some people think that nowadays, science is relatively important subject due to the development of engineering and technologies, others and I believe that such tendency can lead to detrimental effects on our life and society. (7 min)
Biased learning like focusing on the subjects related to science in educational institutions can cause adolescents to have narrow thinking. If this trend is prevalent, youngsters have no choice but to have fault way of thinking, which means that the young cannot receive other things like drama and literature and might only believe that science is the most important t among disciplines. A good example to illustrate the importance of this point would be for students to condemn a educational system because this system provide other lectures which is no related to science. Conclusively, many adolescents are not able to have critical thinking due to the biased thinking brought about courses gearing to the science.
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Also, in order to achieve the success of educational programs, students should learn about various kinds of subjects. It means that adolescents are provided by a variety of stimulus and by doing so, they are able to have creative and expansive thinking. This is why government and related educational authorities should provide opportunities to have music and art lectures. Through students reading numerous books and witnessing new things like visiting art gallery and playing instruments, they can learn comprehensive performance and collaborate other experts who do not study science. Additionally, this new experiences relieve and alleviate their stress. Collectively, educational system that can learn various subjects is able to have positive impacts on our life and society through sensible thinking and collaboration. (30min)
In conclusion, educational institutions focusing on subjects related to the science can have negative development on our life and society. (32min)
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