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The table
compares the sum count of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and
the year after the improvement. The pie charts demonstrate the results from the
visitor's surveys which were conducted to observe how they were contended on
their experience during the same given period.
In
general, the total number of visitors increased after the refurbishment.
Furthermore, the percentage of people who were satisfied with the refurbished
museum also increased.
Looking
at the table, while there were 74,000 visitors to the museum before the
refurbishment, 92,000 people visited after the museum refurbished. Prior to the
improvement, only 15% and 30% of visitors were 'very satisfied' and 'satisfied' with their visit, respectively each. However, after the re-open, 35% and 40% of people shared their ' very
satisfied' and 'satisfied' feedback.
While
there were 40% of 'dissatisfied' answers before, it decreased up to 15% in the
year after the refurbishment. Seeing 'very dissatisfied' answer, the ratio was
halved from 10% to 5%. The proportions of no responders were same with a figure
of 5% in both years.
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