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The diagram illustrates how plastic is recycled to the new proucts.>> 문제와 동사마저 똑같네요 감점이 되는 요인이구요 동사 하나라도 바꾸셔야 합니다
Firstly, the plastic is collected by the council from recycling bins. >> 끊어주세요 Then, it is then taken to a plastic recycling deposit centre by the recycling trucks. plastic bottles are marked with a recycling code numbered one through seven , one to seven, indicating what kind of plastic it is made from. Once it is taken to the plastic recycling deposit, the plastic matterial is seperated by its code.
Once it is organized, the sorted groups are sent to the reach plastic container is to be shredded into plastic flakes one at a time. Next, the plastic flakes are washed by coustic soda to remove any labels, oil, or food. In oder to melt the plastic, the flakes are headed in an oven until they melt after they are washed. When they melt successfully, the plastic is molded and made into new plastic or new products. S >> such as 가 독립문장이 될 수 없습니다 such as a milk or juice bottle.
After the new products are used, the whole recyclcing processes repeats again.
6.5를 받고 싶으시다면 우선 글 다 쓰시고 오타 점검부터 해주세요 비록 컴퓨터라 오타가 잘 난다지만 그게 한두번이 아니라면 그걸 실력으로 보고 저도 채점합니다 콤마에 대해서도 공부 꼭 하세요 6.5 받고 싶으시다면 정확한 스펠링 콤마는 기본 중에서도 기본입니다 서론도 문제 똑같이 쓰시는 버릇 들이면서 페러프레이즈가 안 된다고 판단이 된다면 6점대 넘기도 힘듭니다
Task Achievement - 5 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6 5.5 예상합니다 |