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These days, across
the world, judgement about other people is determined by what a person has such
as social status, amount of money, and so on >> 서론에서 and so on 을 쓰는건 좋지 않습니다 정확하게 제시해줘야 하기 때문입니다. Some people maintain that in
living on capitalism system, we cannot escape from this tendency. I generally
agree with this view and I will discuss the reason below.
First of all, we
cannot have a time with other people, compared to the past. This is caused by
changing living environments such as centered on city urban lifestyles, which is likely
to be busy and stressful. Besides, with the society becoming more complex, people
have to learn more and think of other people >> other 복수명사입니다 as competitors. Therefore, in like such as
these situations, if people want to know other people during for short time and continue
to have a relationship with them, a person will have no choice, but they need to judge them
according to having visible things firstly.
Moreover, most media
further stimulate these phenomena further. In capitalism system, all of economy actors>> ??
have to inform and sell their resources competitively. For instance, if you
turn on the TV right now, you can easily experience face 혹은 watch 정도가 괜찮겠네요 a lot of advertisements for
selling products. The force of stimulating to buy something is very strong,
thus >> so thus는 문장 이어주는 기능이 없습니다 even if a product is not necessary for them, they may buy it. The case of
marketing on home-shopping can be fitted in this situation. Many women have addicted to
it, calling them shopping-addiction. Such as the present time, selling and
advertising happen enormous times, old-fashioned values such as friendship,
love, and so on are weaker and weaker.
In conclusion, as
time goes by, I think the tendency of consuming harder and judging other people
with belongings become strengthened more and more. Therefore, we need to reflect
our life and innovate our system for understanding deeply what the most
valuable things are in our life.
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