▶ Your Answer :
The pie
chart gives data about the sales of bottle Coca-Cola by region in 2000, while
the line graph illustrates Coca-Cola’s share price from 1996 to 2001.
In the pie
chart, the 5 >> 퍼센트나 도표의 숫자 등이 아닌 10 이하의 숫자는 영어로 써주시길 바랍니다 regions reached a sales total of 17.1 billion bottles of Coca-Cola in
the year of 2000. North America has the most significant numbers on the pie
chart, 30.4% of sales are from this region. Latin America is very competitive
and is just 5% away from being the top selling region with 25.7% of the total
sales. The 3rd place largest one goes to Europe with 20.5%, followed by Asia at
16.4%. Africa and the Middle East region have a figure of 7%of the total sales.
The line
graph shows very clearly the fluctuating trend of Coca-Cola stock in the financial
marketing for the period of 6 years from 1996 to 2001. From 1996,>> 전치사 문두에 나오면 콤마로 나눠주세요 the share price
rose steadily from $40 to the first peak of $70 in the middle of 1997. Then, there
was a sharp decline at the end of 1997, which was followed by a gradual rise to
the second peak. >> 깁니다 나눠주세요 . It reached about $80 and it is the highest point inside the
figure in the second season of 1998. From then, the price plunged, >> 세개 나열이니 and 빼주세요 kept
unstable and decreased until the second season in 2000. The price soared from
season 2 to 3 in 2000 and reached $60. then After that, a downward trend was shown in the first season
in 2001.
The pie
chart can surly help the Coca-Cola sales team to have more ideas of selling
strategies such as how to increase the market shares in the region of Africa and
the Middle East. >> 깁니다 끊어주세요 because soft drinks are a kind of consumer goods which we
can see if the global economy is good, the sales are better and the result in stock
market also will be more positive >> 본인의 생각이시죠? 앞에 부분은 무슨 말인지 모르겠습니다.
너무 깁니다 이건 Task2 정도의 길이입니다 게다가 긴만큼 본인의 집중력도 떨어져 전에 쓰신 글들에 비해 정말 오류가 많네요 콤마 스펠링 잘 보시고 문장의 콤마나 마침표 뒤엔 한 칸 띄는 것도 문법입니다
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5 5.5 예상합니다 |