The four charts compare the electricity production by five different fuel sources such as coal, oil, natural gas, hydro power, >> 세개 이상의 나열 중 마지막 and 앞에 콤마 넣어주세요 and nuclear power in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000.
In the year of 1980, the major electrical fuel source produced in Australia was coal,>> 콤마 빼주세요 with about 50 units out of 100 in total production. Other remainder sources that the country used were from hydro power and natural gas producing 20 units each and oil which produced 10 units.
By 2000, there was a big increase in total production which rose up to 170 units than the previous 100 units in 1980. Coal had become more important as a fuel providing more than 75% of the production. Hydro power was the only significant source that still contributes to the production of electricity production in the other sources. Hydro power supplied approximately 20% and other sources, natural gas and oil, were not even 1% of total production in 2000.
In contrast, the charts of French electricity units show very different aspects, compared 는 앞에 콤마가 있어줘야합니다 compared to the electricity units those of Australia. In 1980, France used coal and natural gas as a source for only 25 units of electricity each and 25 units of electricity were produced from oil(20 units) and hydro power(5 units).
There was a very salient point that France used nuclear power, which Australia had never used, as a fuel source producing 15 units in 1980. However, nuclear power has been considered >> have pp는 과거부터 현재까지 이어져오는 것입니다 as the main supplement produced almost 75% of electricity (126 units) in France by 2000. Coal produced 25 units, which was matched to oil and the remaining >> remained 는 없습니다 sources, natural gas and hydro power, supplied the very little amounts of electricity, only 2 units in total of 180 units.
Taken altogether, these charts provide the information of how much of which fuel sources were used by these countries used by in 1980 and in 2000 respectively and the principal sources. Australia depended on coal and France relied on nuclear power.
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