▶ Your Answer :
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
high school students surveyed on subject preference in one European city in the
year 1997.
At first glance, it is clearly seen that
the most popular subject for girls and boys was drama while history and
mathematics were the least popular subjects for young students.
As seen in the chart, the subject preference
rates between boys and girls are almost the same in science, German and mathematics.
However, in other subjects, there were noticeable differences. Over 20% of
women expressed their interest in music, which is as three times as higher than
that of boys. The preference of English is also much higher than boys.
On the other hand, 35% of boys preferred
geography, which is double the rate of the interest girls showed. doubled that of girls. In addition accounting is a relatively
popular subject for boys with 20 percent.
(여학생들이 더 많이 선호하거나 남학생이 더 많이 선호 하는 과목을 써주실때는 앞서 소개를 시켜 주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 예를 들어서 There are two subjects female students showed more interest than boys and vice versa.)
To sum up, although the responses vary
according to personal interest and ability, regardless of gender, it appears
that most of the students to enjoy drama and science the most.
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