<Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?>
From the perspective of some people, using only fewer languages in a society makes people’s life much easier since few languages disappear on an annual basis. I personally disagree with this statement because there are needs to protect minor cultures and identities (이런 식으로 완전하게 써주셔야 합니다.) for protecting some’s culture and identity.
To begin with, the language that people speak is directly related to their nation and community, and others should respect and support the idea of using their own languages. For example, there are majority of people from different countries in Canada. Even if they immigrated to Canada for various reasons, they are still more likely to preserve their culture in new land by speaking their mother tongue. That way, they can feel their home town and family in Canada. The Canadian government also supports their idea to express their respect toward new immigrants because they understand that forcing Canadian culture and language dose not make feel them adjusted adjusting to a life of new country.
Moreover, practically speaking, the main languages such as English, Chinese and Spanish are not the easy languages to learn for majority of people since people have different linguistic habits. For example, when people from North America, got used to speak languages based on alphabetical structure and they are surely having hard time pronounce other languages. (여기는 후반부 때문에 살짝 꼬였는데, 댓글 한번 주세요!) If the authority of country insist them to use other languages not their national language then, it will be a big problem and confusion to make for many people such as performing families or entering work force. Despite the hardship and pressure that the reasons for leaning new language, it would not making make their life easier and more convenient.
In conclusion, it is evident that continuing to speak the language people can identify themselves is certainly important not only for protecting their culture but also to enable becoming them to feel much comfortable.
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