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People have different opinions on whether or not it is valuable to young people travelling other countries. For this reason, it is generally acknowledge that the issue of value of travelling to overseas has become controversal in the course of time. Some assert that young people waste a plenty of time and money to travel abroad. However, I strongly believe that it is worthy to young people those who want to travel abroad. In this essay, both viewpoints will be discussed in detail with appropriate supports.
On the one hand, young people tend to travel overseas to learn and experience other culture. According to the research conducted by Korean University Research Centre, over two third of university students who have an experience travelling overseas responded that it is very valuable to learn and experience other country's culture. A majority of students said it was useful time to communicate with local people and understand their lifetyles while travelling abroad. Furthermoer, that leads young people to have a job opportunity in foreign countries. In this sense, young people would like to travel overseas to enlarge their experience or improve their knowledge.
On the other hand, some people insist that travelling abroad waste too much time and money for the young. For instance, one of my friend planned to go overseas but he could not receive financial supporing from his parents. To save money, he started part-time job during the school session. He just concentrated on saving money rather than his study. As a result, he could not gain enough academic credits for examination. Moerover, he spent a lot of money to buy items for travelling and spent all money for tour, flight and accommodation. In this regard, travelling overseas has a negativen aspects for young people by sezing their precious time and money.
In conclusion, it is a good opportunity for young people to visit other countries and they can gain the value of travelling. However, it could also have a drawbacks to young people who have insufficient finance by causing waste of time and expense. However, I strongly believe that having experience in foreign countries is more valuable towards their future job and widen their knowledge.
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