People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.
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With the development of education, the proportion of people choosing the courses of universities and colleges has become higher than before. Moreover, the candidates>> applicants who apply higher level eduction have constantly increased year-by-year with their diverse reasons. For this fact, I suggest a couple of most common reasons why the people want to enroll the higher education such as universities and colleges.>>
Firstly, students apply to universities to prepare for their better careers. The reason behind this is that most large companies or public organization are tend to recruit new employers who acquired universities or colleges courses,>>콤마 빼주세요 even have done further higher educated.Moreover, they prefer the applicants to achieve more fluent, educated than others. For instance, according to the survey from Ministry of Labor in Korea, the results showed the gap between the labors of the high school graduated and the university graduated. To be specific, the minimum gap of salary was $100 per time, and the maximum rate was $2,000. Moreover, the high school graduated workers were manual laborers. Meanwhile, the university graduated ones were belonging to national organizations or several large companies. >> workers from high school and from university 이렇게 표현해주시구요
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In addition, another reason aspiring the students of universities and colleges is that they desire a lot of new experiences. Specifically, universities and colleges are the arena of social networking. Although the students in the university have diverse characteristics and come from other provinces, they can encounter with their interests and broaden their social network during their university life. For example, from one of my experiences, I met many friends in my university life, despite I was an new comer of the province of my university located. This is because, various group activities and unions, and residence life encountered the students, then broaden my sociality.>> 주어 동사 호환관계가 좋지 못합니다
In conclusion, in my perspective, universities and colleges have really atteactive factors that the students admire to enter there. In detail, these institutions are not only concluding the quality of future job, but also the arena of broaden student's social networks.>> 콤마 빼주세요 마지막 문장
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