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Today is called as the era of
globalization. Therefore, it is very common to see children who learn a foreign
language from an early age. In this regard, some educators assert that early education
of foreign language has detrimental impacts. However, I strongly believe that
children greatly benefit from this learning. In this essay, the desirable
effects and drawbacks will be explained as well as my opinion regarding this
debate. <(질문은 답해주는 thesis statement이 필요합니다)
When it comes to advantages, an earlier age
is the optimal period of languages acquisition; a person whose age is younger
have a by far by better capability in terms of learning a foreign language. According to
numerous studies conducted by Korean Education Council, students who started to
learn English from an earlier age are more likely to feel greater interests in learning
another language compared to others who began to learn English after graduation
from primary school. As can be seen, in order to help children to learn easily languages
with interests, primary school should provide students with foreign language education.
On the other hand, it is generally believed that premature education of foreign languages might be a hindrance with regards to the development of native language skills. During primary school years, most of students
are not aware completely aware of their mother tongue language yet. In fact, many
people who went to study abroad before secondary school often encounter
difficulties when they speak complicated words or sentences in their home
languages. Given the above, learning another language from too early stages may
leads to deficiency in a native language.
To recapitulate, although there could be
some impediments to the advancement of home language speaking skills, I speculate
the education should be provided as early as possible. This is because the
significance of becoming bilingual is increasing, keeping up with contemporary
globalized age.
Score: 5 Comment: 질문은 답해주고 있지 않습니다. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages로 들리며 conclusion을 보면은 benefits and negative impacts 보다는 when a foreign language should be taught and why 에 대한 질문을 답해주는 것 같습니다. 질문을 잘 답해주시지 않거나 off topic이 될 경우 감점 요인이 될 수 있습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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