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Nowadays, we are living in the world where more and more fast food outlets are flooding on the street, whereas the number of traditional food restaurants is decreasing. Although the popularity of pre-prepared food has a good influence on us, I still believe that we should be alert to the change of health condition as well as personality.
Needless to say, fast food is deeply involved in our lives and helps both individuals and society. To save time within a limited break, modern people are more likely to go and have pre-prepared meal. This ready-to-eat food encourages people not to skip their meal especially who feel a burden on spending more than an hour to eat. In addition, as fast food branches are becoming globalized globalization, the world is getting closer. This is because having familiar food in the foreign country could leave people a positive impression on that country. 문제에서 fast food의 장단점을 모두 논하라고 요구하지 않았기 때문에 불필요한 문단이에요. 전통음식을 fast food가 대체하게 된 것을 부정적으로 보는 시작에 동의하는지/아닌지를 묻고 있으니 이에 동의한다면 동의하는 근거에 대해서만 본론문단을 여러 개 구성하는 것이 coherence면에서 더 좋은 글이 됩니다.
However, I cannot help but say saying that negative effects of the fast food are more obvious. First of all, we are running short of patience as we are used to getting meals quickly. Nowadays, customers are tend to complain of their delayed pack and are unpleasant for waiting even for a short time. Furthermore, governments spend more taxes on public health care service. Most of fast food contain high calories of ingredients and are not well-balanced, and these cause adult diseases. Therefore, to prevent and cure adult diseases such as diabetes and heart disease, more and more budgets currently flow into the hospitals.
For the reasons mentioned above, I totally agree that we should be aware of negative impact of fast food because of tax burden as well as impatience.
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