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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people say that people should live with what they have, while others contend that people should try hard for a better situation. Both sides have reasonable explanations, but I think it is better to try and improve a difficult situation.
Some advantages do exist when one chooses to accept the current situation and live with it. One who accepts may not have to try so hard and be less stressful. To accept is certainly more comfortable both physically and mentally than to try to overcome. However, by accepting, people lose a chance to progress and improve their lives.
By trying to overcome a situation, a person can grow. When people have goals, such as academic achievement or promotion at work, they try to improve. This goal becomes purpose of people's lives and gives people energy to live. For example, my brother had a money issue two years ago. He had a goal to fix his problem by getting a better job. This goal led him to focus on his studies, which got him a well-paying job, and he felt much satisfied than before.
Also, each person's endeavor to improve one's status builds the progress of the world. I believe that today's cultural and scientific development is the result of individuals' hard work. If everyone bears with their current situation, there will be no development in the society.
Although it is a little more stressful to overcome difficult circumstances, people should make efforts to improve their situation. Trying is important not only for one's own sake but also for the progress of humanity.