1. 목표하시는 점수, : 6.0
2. 다음 시험 예정 날짜, : 18th Jan
3. 이전에 시험을 치렀을 경우 그때의 점수, : 4.0
4. 현재 글을 시간을 재고, 아무런 외부의 도움 없이 작성했는지의 여부 : 네
5. 기타 현재 상황
Art and music classes should not be mandatory at school, To what extent do you agree or disagree??
It is true that art and music classes should not be mandatory at school. However, I am of the opinion that taking the art and music classes should be a requisiteness for students. Because it can help to develop emotional growth and personalities development for students and allow them to find their own path in the future as encouraging them to attempt different things.
To begin with, I firmly believe that art and music classes can play an important role in mental and physical development for adolescents. Student can enhance and convey their thoughts not only direct ways such as writing and speaking but also non-verbal expressions through creative activities. Besides, these creative activities are not only mandatory subjects and it can be an effective way to unwind from the stress and a burden of daily life.
On top of that, creative activities can enable youth to find their own direction in a life. I strongly believe that school should offer their students a well-rounded education. It can lead underage find their strengths and specialties which they have not recognised yet and helps to broaden their horizons and enrich their soul. For example, one of my previous students William who has received offers from many art universities mentioned that if he had not started taking art classes he would have never found his interest and passion in a field of graphic design.
To sum up, physical education and art classes can help to develop emotional growth for teenagers and guide them to find their own path in the future as encouraging them to attempt diverse ways and have different points of view. For these reasons, it is clear that creative activities such as art and music classes should be indispensable at school.
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