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The map picture illustrates the plan view of the
city called Brandfield there are two sites, S1 and S2, as candidates for the area to be developed to with constructing a new shopping mall in Brandfield.
To begin with, there is a city centre in the middle of the
map, which is located between S1 and S2. The >> river 앞엔 a 가 아닌 the 가 붙습니다 river crosses through the city
centre from the direction of north to south, which looks like the a mirrored
shape >>?? of alphabet “c”, bordering S1. Thr road’s shape>> 어디에 있는 road 죠? seems to be “Y”, which
bordering S1 and S2 respectively. Thr railway >>한 단어입니다 also limits >> limit이 확실한 표현은 아닌 듯 싶습니다 limit S1 and S2 라고 하면 S1 과 S2의 뭘 제한시킨단거죠? 단어 혹은 뒤에 추가적인 설명이 부족합니다 S1 and S2, crossing
from north west to south east. In addition, there is a golf course and
park in the west side of the city centre, and the industrial estate is in the
east side. The housing estate is placed in the north west side of S1.
Overall, S1 will be more appropriate for a
shopping mall since the area is adjacent to the city centre and the house
estate, attracting more general people than S2 area does.>> 사람이 더 몰리는지 저 지도를 보고 어떻게 알죠?
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