Your Answer ▼ It is true that nowadays urbanization is causing lots of problems. Some people say that moving corporate buildings can be helpful for both cities and rural areas. I agree with the idea that moving many existing facilitates from the cities the the country sides (이게 helpful한지 안 helpful한지까지 써야 complete한 문장이 됩니다).
First of all, big cities such as Seoul, Busan in Korea already have had densely populated metropolis. Those cities have too much high population growth to many problems occur. For examples, traffic and environment problems(여기서 문장 끝내면 안 이어집니다. 이것만 쓰고 싶었다면 For example, there are traffic and environment problems라고 작성해야합니다). A number of companies infrastructures are concentrated in the few cities. It exerts regional equal development. Through moving large companies factories to the rural areas, the nation can achieve not only equitable economic increase but also unemployment rate can be decreased in the country
Secondly, urbanization is accompanied by (accompany by인지 with인지 다시 읽어주세요)serious environmental pollution such as smog, acid rain things. If the equal development is accomplished, environment troubles will be reduced because there will bee less people living in the city. It means less emission of carbon dioxide from vehicles and alleviates(앞 동사와 뒤에 동사가 맞지 않습니다. 이럴경우 동사를 맞춰주던지, 따로따로 나눠서 문장 써야합니다) smog trouble than before. Except for these two reasons than I aforementioned, moving facilities to the countryside will also remedy in traffics, hosing shortage problems.
In conclusion, there are several advantages of moving companies, factories and employees to be solved urbanization. In order to cure cities problems caused by urbanization, people should care about our cities by acting some actions. That's the reason why I completely agree with the idea. |