Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In fast-changing world, many people say that we are surrounded by myriads of choices. I also agree with this view, however I believe we could have limited choices in some situations.
On the one hand, a lot of products are introduced into our competitive market. Many businesses are in a fierce competition to survive, and countless new content is created all over the world. This indicates that we are given too many options in many situations, which distracts us to make an appropriate decision. For example, Netflix, a media platform, offers a streaming service of hundreds of TV series, films, and documentaries. A recent survey has shown that some viewers are overwhelmed by a number of thumbnails on its first page, so that they cannot even start watching one.
However when one's competency comes into play in making decisions among many options, things change. Watching Netflix does not require any competition with others. While when you have to choose which universities you will apply to based on your SAT score, you would be limited to choose even though a lot of options exist. The same goes with having a job. Many choices will be narrowed down to some extent as your competency is considered for your employment.
To sum up, it is true that we are surrounded by flooding options to choose in competitive world, but there could be some situations where we cannot have all choices.
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