The chart provides information on consuming the amount of money on buying books by customers in five four different of countries (Germany, France, Italy, and Austria) from 1995 to 2005.>> 쓰실 때 집중 해주세요 four 를 five라 쓰는 너무 어이없는 실수가 나왔습니다
At first glance, spending the biggest amount of money is in 2005 for Germany, France, Italy, and Austria. >> all given countries spent the most amount of money in 2005. Therefore, the country, which took up the largest proportion of spending on buying books, country is Germany among four countries as the figure reached over 90millions dollars >> 수치가 나오는건 오버뷰가 아니라 디테일입니다 현재 오버뷰만 모아둔 듯 해서 지워드렸습니다. Especially, Germany has kept the largest amount of dollars on buying books for the given years. However, between from in 1999 to and 2003, German expenditure line showed that falling down the expenditures a downward trend.
On the other hands, Austria spent the lowest of took account for the lowest on buying books at preciously 30millions >> millions 라고 하면 수백만입니다 dollars in over 2001. However, in 2003, Austria outstripped Italy. After in 2005, we can predict it was recorded that Austria will overtook France. Lastly, France and Italy had not been that much different for over ten years. In 1997, France was surpassed by Italy different about approximately 1 >> 몇 퍼센트 같은 수치를 나타내는 숫자가 아니라면 10이하는 영어로 써주세요 millions.
In the summary conclusion, being comprehensive, in 2005, the trend of Germany, France, Italy, and Austria have for buying books increased on consuming books , even though almost of all countries were depressed in 2003 except Austria.
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