▶ Your Answer : Nowadays, many wastes have been being generated from homes. Some some people think that not all wastes are recycled aren't recyled, so they say that governments government have to regulate the recycling of wastes for increasing recycling. In my opinion, it is not effective that the governments require the recycling recyling of wastes to citizen.
First of all, the amount of wastes from homes has have been being increasing rather than before. If the governments could regulate the recycling recyling of wastes, citizens should pay many fines and can feel hostility toward feels untrust about the government law. Moreover, it is difficult that the government have to modify a standard of paying fines of recycling recyling of wastes according to increasing the number of wastes from homes. For example, if four people poeple live in one home, many wastes are produced happened and lots of fines can be is paid more than that of two people live in one home. Thus, this situation is unfair and harder to make a fair law about recycling. recyling of wastes.
Secondly, . I think that it is very important importnat to grow good civic consciousness. I l know that making civic consciousness is highly difficult, however but it is absolutely needful. In For instance, if If the government gevernment could start the recycling recyling law of wastes, people might be throw thowing away the wastes on illegal places. On the contrary, if If citizens have good civic consciousness, they will not don't throw away the wastes and will try to reduce the amount of wastes by themselves.
Consequently, I disagree disagress that the government should make the recycling regulation recyling law of on wastes because it is not effective. I hope that citizens have has to think to reduce the wastes by themselves themselces, so they could do be better about various social society activities.
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