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The table chart shows the information on
preferred TV programmes watched by three different age groups(11-15, 16-20 and
21-25) in one European nation in 2012.
In general, we can see that there was a similar preference among the age groups, with program B being largely popular with all the age groups. Programme E was least commonly watched by the youngest age group.<(False/ Program E 가 아닌 Program C입니다)
According to the data, the 11-15 age group enjoyed
programme A the most, which was inversely least popular with people aged 21-25,
with 25% and 4% respectively. For the 16-20 age group, programme B and D were the most favorite
programmes, and the rest of other programmes had a similar popularity which were less
watched than programme B and D, with 13, 14 and 15 respectively. <(13, 14, 15이 무엇에 대한 data인지 clear하지 않습니다)
To sum up, it is obvious that there were different
preferences among each age groups, however, certain programmes were enjoyed by all the age groups as a whole. <(which were?) Moreover, programme A was increasingly popular, as people grow older, on the other hand, programme B' preference was opposite, becoming less popular, as people aged. <(False/Program A는 나이가 많을수록 unpopular했으며 Program B는 비슷비슷하게 popular했습니다)
Score: 5.5 Comment: 잘못 전달이 된 정보나 clear하지 않는 정보가 많습니다. 그렇기 때문에 글쓴이가 테이블 차트를 잘 이해를 못하신 것 처럼 보입니다. 글쓰시는데에는 크게 문제가 없어 보이십니다. 다만 잘못 된 정보가 전달이 되지 않도록 전달을 해주시는 정보를 테이블과 double check 해주시기를 바랍니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |