문제 : The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart gives information about the amount of electricity produced and consumed in 10 different countries and the rank.
Overall, it was China where the most amount of electricity was generated and used in 2014. The common tendency one can find is the fact that the amount of produced electricity was slightly over that of consumed one in most countries in this chart, but the only exception was Germany.
To be more specific, to begin with comparison in production, the top country produced 10 times more than the lowest country, Korea, Rep. In addition, the gap in the amount of produced electricity was not notable in the 5 lowest countries.
The similar tendency was seen in regards with the electricity consumption. Interestingly, although Germany ranked 9th when considered both the production and consumption of electricity, they spent more electricity than Canada which ranked 6th.
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task 2는 어찌어찌 시간맞춰 썼고 4분 정도 남겼는데 뒷부분은 거의 날림식으로 썼습니다.ㅠㅠ 시간 분배가 쉽지 않네요..
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