writing task 1
문제:
You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
-explain why you would like the job
-give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
-say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any adresses.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
제가 쓴 글입니다:
Dear Madam,
Hello. This is Donghui Wi. I just have seen the advertisement you made in the magazine an advertisement in an Australian magazine. I would like to look after your six-year-old child. Because because I really love children and I have steadily volunteered in a children center for 5 years. So I really know well about how to get along with a child. And according to my experience, children follow me a lot and they love me so much. Also, I can say "don't" well. It could be useful for the safety for your child. I can say the words like "don' run. If you run too fast, you could get hurt. So be careful." appropriately. My kind explanation and nurture skills are is very good. So I'm the most suitable person to employ. (여기 관련해서 매끄럽게 이어주셔야 합니다. 또한, 밑에서 말씀드리겠지만 문단도 구분해주셔야 하고요.) I will spent my free time to go sightseeing the view of Australia. I really like to take a trip. From many trips, I experienced a lot of different cultures and it must be helpful to explain and talk with your child. Thank you for your reading.
Donghui Wi.
총평: (6/5/6/5) 5.5
5.0은 크게 높은 점수가 아니기 때문에, 받으시는데에 크게 문제는 없을 것으로 보입니다. 편지글의 경우도 문단 구분은 필요한데, 보통은 인삿말 (자기소개) 를 제외하고 논제의 세 조건마다 하나의 문단을 만드신다고 보면 됩니다. 이것도 엄연히 점수에 들어가므로 주의해주세요! 수고하셨습니다 :)