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Testing is a feature of most education systems, but, in many
countries, children are undergoing more tests and examinations during their
school career presence in school than ever before. The exams are often taken by education
authorities in an attempt to raise
standards.>> what standards ? However, the results of this
policy are quite often appear to the opposite of what was intended.
A key problem with most tests is that teachers are required
to follow a specific syllabus. This
means that they are not free to develop a course to suit their students’
particular needs,>>콤마 빼주세요 or to introduce different, more relevant,>> 콤마 빼주세요 topics. In this
way, good teachers are prevented from using their skills and experiences to provide
benefit to their students as fully as possible. >> 시간표에 따르라고 요구되는 것이 문제다 애매모호합니다 주장은 본인의 본문 한 단락을 전체 포함해야 합니다
Another important issue is that tests are streeful>> ??. They
introduce give pressure and anxiety into children’s education at a time>> 압력과 근심을 아이들이 아닌 아이들의 교육에 주나요? when >> 재밌고 즐길 수 있는 경험이 되어야 하는 때에 한국말론 괜찮지만 영어 상에선 어색하다고 생각드네요
learning should be an exciting and enjoyable experience. Excessive testing in
the early years may therefore be counterproductive and actually discourage some
children from continuing their studies.
A third point is that tests are not equally fair to all
candidates. Those with particular skills, such as the ability to memorise facts
or write essays in a limited time, are likely to perform well. Conversely,
students without these skills may achieve disappointing results, no matter how
hard they study or how well they know their subject. >> 이건 애초에 교육이라는 경쟁이 내장된 시스템을 지적하는 말입니다 스킬들은 배워서 익혀야 하는건데 없다고 그게 불공평하다고 한다면 잘못된 주장입니다
In conclusion, while it is clear that some tests needs to be taken
place in our school system,
it seems to me for all the reasons mentioned above, that too heavy great an emphasis on exams too early. >> 문장 이으시면 틀립니다 It is
not only unhelpful but also potentially harmful for young learners.
본문이 부족하네요 본문 단락은 두개면 됩니다 세번째 주장은 짧기도 해서 설득에는 효과가 없네요 또한 주장도 너무 근거가 부족해 미숙해보입니다 본문을 늘려주세요
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