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This table shows the rate of babies born to femail who were
40-44 years in Australia per every year>> per year의 그래프가 아니네요. From 1981 to 2006, women aged 40-44 gave a birth to two infants most, >> 콤마 넣어주세요 while
the rate of mothers having four or more
children was the least, 11%. In 1981, women who had gave birth bore to two children
were more than three and four or more children ,29.0% vs. 27.4% , 27.6.>> 무슨 말인지 ㅁ르겠네요 둘을 낳은 여성들은 셋 넷 그 이상보다 많았다 ? The
percentage of the number of females having none or one baby was considerably less than two
children’s the highest proportion,>> 콤마 빼주세요 about one quarter as much women had two babies. In the period of 1986 until 1996, the number of two children
born to two children's mothers who were earily forties had increased. Similarly, women giving birth to none or one
child had been were more than the rate of 1981. However, three, four, or more
children’s rate had decreased in these recent period. On the other hand, 15 years after, two-child families were predominate, whereas four or more
children became less half of the number in 1981.
Overall, by age of 41-44 years, the proportion of women who had
had three or more children fell significantly since the 1980’>> 따옴표 빼주세요 s , while
the proportions who had had no child,>> 콤마 빼주세요 or only one or two children had
increased.
had pp 는 과거의 어떤 시점부터 어떤 시점 즉 알지 못하는 어떤 과거부터 과거를 나타냅니다 현재는 그래프에서 어디부터 어디까지라고 표시가 되어 있어서 쓰기가 부적절합니다 또한 여러 익스프레션을 만드려하셔서 틀린 부분들이 있었지만 다양하게 써주셔서 좋았습니다
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