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The two maps below give information on how
an island has changed due to the construction of some tourist facilities.
With the construction of the facilities, a
big tourist accommodation complex island has been made, including a pier, a
restaurant, a swimming beach, a reception and accommodations. Such facilities
are connected through footpaths and vehicle tracks. <(good)
Between the two palm tree areas, where it
used to be an empty place, a reception is founded to connect two large
accommodation areas, one having six accommodations formed with the palm trees
in the west as a centre and the other having nine accommodations built next to
the palm trees in the east side of the island. The two accommodation complexes
have footpaths on which tourists go around in each complex, and especially the
one on the west side is connected to the beach where people can swim even.
In the north, a restaurant is located,
where tourists can reach with the vehicle tracks surrounding the reception and
to the restaurant. Also, tourists can enjoy taking yachts from the pier which
is also connected through the vehicle track from the reception towards the
south. With these sites, the island seems more lively and seems to attract more
tourists for relaxation and leisure.
Score: 8.5 or higher Comment: 잘 전달해주셨습니다. 다만 글자수가 200 정도 되시는데 시간을 잘 계산해서 쓰시거나 아니면 조금 더 summarize를 하시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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