Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that all students in school should take a class in (이렇게 뒤와 반복되는 내용은 앞에 안 써주셔도 됩니다. 최대한 simple하게 해주세요) art and music classes. However, I firmly believe that it should not be mandatory and this should be let (필요없는 구간인데다가 문법 틀렸습니다)students decide whether they take an art and music class or not.
To begin with, it is not necessary for students to take a class that they are not interested in. I totally disagree with the idea from those who are in education industry which they normally insist that it creates (여기까지가 생각보다크게 의미가 없는 부분입니다. 굳이 안써도 되는 부분) a fondship between peers and reduces stress from regular classes by taking art and music classes. For example, based on my back in school years, at least, one or two art and music classes were in my curriculum because it was not an option for me to decide. when I and my classmates took one of those classes, it was just a mess. Not only they were not interested in learning music and art but they also thought that it just a waste of time. Most students thought (과거형을 쓰는 이유가 뭔가요? 이렇게 그냥 basic 한 statement말할 때는 현재형 쓰셔도 됩니다) that they rather take another English or Math classes than classes like music or art.
On top of that, there are plenty activities for students to reduce stress. school is not a place to reduce stress. It is a place for academic learning so that they can build a career for their future. They will be able to reduce stress after school. Another based on my experience, I spent most of my after school time playing sports with my friends. hanging out with my friends boosted up friendship and helped me reduce stress.(help다음에는 동사원형입니다) besides we live in a 21st century, Most students could be able to reduce stress by watching a movie or playing a game. Although, it may not seem like educational but it would be a lot help than taking a music or art class which most students do not want.
To sum up, it would be a waste of time to take a music and art class that students are not interested in. And also, a lot of activities for students to low stress. For these reasons, Taking music and art classes should not be mandatory at school.
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