Your Answer ▼ Dear Janet,
I hope this letter finds you well. I'm writing to notice note you that I finally passed the exam for AB college. I'm planning to move your country and then prepare for my first semester that my first semester begins. I was worried about my portfolio because I've never done that before. Now that I can't wait my graphic design lectures. (이 두 문장은 조금씩 꼬였는데, 어떤 의미로 적어주셨는지 및 앞 부분과의 연결이 어떤 식으로 이루어진 건지 대략적인 상황 설명을 해주시면 확인하고 이에 맞춰 수정해드리겠습니다.) As you know, international students should pay more expensive fees. Not as much money as citizens. (일단 이 문장은 완전한 문장이 아니긴 한데, 이를 떠나서 애초에 의미가 반대가 되어야 하지 않나요? 현재 의미는 citizens 들이 더 많은 돈을 내고 있다는 쪽인데, 이는 바로 앞 부분과 충돌하죠.) I was given extra payments and I had to pay tuition fees which include textbooks included textbook and so on. I was really concerned about how I could afford both tuition fees and living costs can be supposed to live there. I can't afford to both tuition fees and living costs.
I've decided to find a part-time job related to in some designing designed tasks. I remember you said that your sister has worked as a junior designer at s (여기는 오타인가요? 일단 s 를 떠나서 a 는 들어가야 합니다.) multinational design company. Could you ask her whether there is a part-time job in the company that I can apply for or not? Doing this will be helpful for me.
Anyway, after my first semester begins, I more and more draw (~할 것이다, ~해야 한다 등의 표현을 넣어서 문장을 완성시켜주세요~) so I'm going to improve my portfolio. Once I learn about some tools such as Adobe illustrate program, I'll build up my portfolio again. In the third semester, And then, I'll prepare to get certification of Adobe tools.
I'm looking forward to hearing your news.
Best Regard, Evan |