Your Answer ▼ These day, the crime rates is rapidly increasing in an alarming way. It (여기 보시면, 이 it 은 문맥상 앞의 crime rate 를 지칭하죠. 그러나 현재 문장 내의 문맥을 고려했을 때, 한국어로 해석하면 '범죄율은 지구 모든 곳에서 일어나는 것 같다.' 라는 의미가 됩니다. 딱 봐도 어색하죠. 이처럼 지칭하는 사항을 나타낼 때, 이런저런 측면을 고려해서 정확하게 만들어주셔야 합니다.) seems to occur everywhere in the globe. Some people claim that there should be some regulations to decrease the amount of crime. I also firmly believe that these phenomenons should be are treated seriously.
First of all, The the power of police must be bigger than before. This is because most criminals tend to think that they can not would be caught by the police when they do bad things. That is, the main cause of crime is that criminals think themselves that their crime will never be revealed. To be specific, a survey shows that a number of criminals did not consider the laws and being arrested by the police arresting when they commit crimes, which means the police need more powerful authority.
On the other hand Furthermore, the punishment is too light to teach them about how awful the things they did were how awful they did. For example, there is a physical punishment in some Asia. If a men did sexual harassment to sexually harassed a women, he would have to be given this physical punishment like caning his butt with caned with a huge wooden stick. It is possible to prevent some crimes. The The stronger punishment we conduct, The safer society people have. This is because it is necessary for the potential criminal to feel fearful.
In conclusion, Both both the police and the punishment should promote their own power and have more authority. One of ways to reduce a rate of crime is that the government build up their strict regulations. That makes it difficult for people to commit cruel crime in advance and it solved from the laws. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) |