The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
The given graph illustrates information on the sales amount of different digital games between 2000 and 2006.
Overall, it is clear that the sales/figures number of handheld games, online games, mobile phone games depict an upward trend, while console games’ sales showed a downward trend over the given period.
In detail, in 2000, at slightly under 12 billion dollars, handheld games were the most popular game. The figure recoded a steady increase to reach a high of 18 billion (달러를 다 붙여주세요~) by 2006. On the other hand, the amount of console games that stood at around 6 billion fell into about a 3 billion boundary in the final year.
In case of others, in the previous year (이것만 봤을 때 이게 언제를 지칭하는 건지 알 수가 없습니다.), no figures were given for online and mobile phone games. Over the next year, the sales of online games started at approximately 1 billion and it experienced a dramatical rise by around 8 billion, surpassing that of mobile games by 2006. Meanwhile, the number of mobile games increased considerably from about 2 billion to just over 7 billion throughout 4 years.
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