시간 : 32분
도움 : 없음
목표 점수 : 6.5
단어수 : 270
시험 점수 : 경험 없음 / 3월 중순-말 예정
Many automobile manufacturers created self-driving systems for their vehicles.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of releasing cars with these systems.
Given reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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It is a common belief that when self-driving systems come to true, this would destroy the car and related of it industries. However, it is a more persuasive argument that self-driving cars will have positively affected our society. This is because that by using self-driving cars, we don’t need to waste our time that we have done, and leads us to be more efficient.
On the one hand, when manufacturers release self-driving cars, traditional industries such as delivery, retail, and truck stops so on, might be destroyed. Because these industries need customers including mainly truck drivers. However, with being able to drive self, drivers will not be a essential resource and leads to workers in related car-industries such as cashier in retail stores, gas-stations. In fact, Andrew yang who is a candidate for next president of USA said that self-driving systems is developed by 97%, and when it release, 4millions people will lose their jobs.
However, if we use a self-driving cars, we could save our time. This is because we spend out time every day to journey to workplace or school. If it’s possible to work or relax in car, efficiency of processing our tasks will improve, and don’t need to be angry in situation of traffic congestion. For instance, Many motor shows in the world, car manufacturers have released their car which’s called office car and relaxing car. They emphasized it includes self-driving systems, customers don’t need to drive car. It leads to improve quality of your life.
To sum up, self driving system has disadvantages to global economic and job market, It is evident its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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