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The bar graph demonstrates the growing procedures of chickens which came from two different sources (egg chickens and meat chickens eggs and meat) 계란/고기 비교가 아니라 산란용 닭과 고기용 닭의 성장도를 비교하는 것이니 키워드를 정확하게 언급해주는 게 나을 것 같아요 for 45 days of observation.
Overall, the meat chickens showed an exponential growth in its mean weight whereas layer chickens showed steady growth. It is apparent that the meat chickens are highly productive than that of egg chickens in comparison to in terms of its weights.
Initially, both of chicken's chicken’s weighted mean was close to 0 grams although despite meat chickens showed a slightly higher in weight than that of layer chickens. This heavy weighted trend continued until the last day of observations. By 20th days, the mean weight weighted for meat chickens increased heavily to reach at over 500 grams which is weight more than double of that those of layer chickens.
From 34th day and ever since, onward, mean weight weighted exponentially increased for meat chickens. By 45th day, the mean weight weighted for meat chickens experienced of approximately 2350 grams, which figureis more than the quadruple quadrupled of that those of layer chickens. The layer chickens, meanwhile, experienced a slow and steady growth and which recorded at above 500 grams at the 45th days.
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