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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water usage for industrial, agricultural and domestic purpose in six areas of
the world.
The vast majority of water consumption in
South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia is for agriculture. By
contrast, most of the water in North America and Europe go to industry.
The agricultural water usages in Central
Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America account for 88%, 84%, 81% and
71% respectively, which is the biggest part of the whole usage. By contrast,
the opposite trends can be seen in the two other countries. The highest water
consumption in North America and Europe is for industry, accounting for 48% and
53% respectively.
Such dramatic differences are not seen when
we look (Academic Task 1에서는 이유불문 1인칭이 들어가서는 안 됩니다. 1인칭이 들어갈 필요가 없기도 하고요. 글을 읽어보니 충분히 영작 실력이 좋으신만큼 이 부분을 1인칭 없이도 구성이 가능하도록 혼자서도 바꿔주실 수 있으리라 보지만, 혹시 모르시겠다면 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) at the percentage of domestic water use. The figure for South America,
Europe and North America are a little higher than the other three countries, accounting
for 19%, 15% and 13%. The respective proportion of water consumed by Africa,
Central Asia and South East Asia for industry are 9%, 7% and 7%. (여기의 경우 각 수치를 너무 일일이 나열만 하는 쪽으로 흘러가기 때문에 좋다고 보기에는 무리가 있죠.) |