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The bar chart depicts the monthly expenditure on food, gas, and clothing of a family living in the USA in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that levels of the expenditure fluctuated over the period.
To begin with, in January, the most money was spent on food,>> 콤마 빼주세요 at approximately $500 per month. Although the expenditure on food increased slighly. For the flowing month, it then fell to account for the lowest expenditure of all the items at the end of the period at just over $300.
Gas appeared to follow the opposite pattern of spending on food spending. It started lower at about $350 per month, fell in the following month, and then increased significantly to finish at just under $600 in April.
Clothing, which was at just over $200, >> which 절 중간 수식의 경우 앞뒤를 콤마로 나눠주세요 accounted for the lowest expenditure at the begining of the period, with fluctuated dramatically over the time frame. After reaching around the same levels as food in Feburuary(nearly $600), it dropped remarkably in March, >>콤마 빼주세요 and then jumped to just under $700 in the final month.
With the exception of an increase in March, average spending decreased slightly over the four months
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