The chart given shows that how many international sightseers traveled five distinct countries(Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France, and the USA) between 1995 to and 2010
First of all, it is clear that the United States is the most popular country throughout the period shown. Also >> also so and or but 은 문두에 쓰지 않습니다 while the numbers of tourists visited France rose rapidly, three out of five nations (Malaysia, Egypt, and Brazil) gradually increased gradually >> 부사는 동사 뒤에서 수식합니다 over a period 15years >> 언제부터 언제까지죠? 시작점이라도 알려주셔야 합니다. >> 오버뷰 디테일 문단 나누지 말아주세요
In 1995, more than twice as many visitors arrived at the United States over 70millions >> million에 s 가 붙으면 수백만이란 뜻입니다, compared to France around 30millions. However, people who visited the Untied States slightly increased slightly around 20millions from 1995 to 2005, >> 콤마 빼주세요 and there was a small drop approximately of approximately 5millions visitors between 2005 and the end of the given period. By contrast, the numbers of people arriving France rose dramatically almost 90millions as equal as visitors to the United States from 1995 to 2010.
Outside of that, the number of tourists visiting Malaysia, Egypt, and Brazil rose steadily to under over the whole period >> 무슨 말이죠?. >> 결론이면 나머지 두 나라도 어땠는지 정도는 간단한 코멘트가 있어야 전체적으로 결론을 짓는 부분이라고 말할 수 있겠죠