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We now live in a globalized society. Therefore, the need of learning a foreign language arises to young students. (문장을 and으로 시작하는 것은 추천하지 않습니다)>And some experts insist that primary school children should start to learning a second language for their future. I agree with this opinion, and I will insist several reasons in this essay. <(질문은 should students start learning a second language in primary school가 아니라 primary school에서 second language을 배우는 장점이 단점을 outweigh 하는지 물어 보고 있습니다)
First of all, children at primary school can easily learn a second language. They feel less stressed about examinations and many lots of textbooks. Teachers start to teach the language as a form of a game or a pay (??) , as the children think that is interesting. According to the experts, Samantha Smith, young children are easily think that the native language and second language both language they learnt in primary school are both their mother tongue, not a foreign language.
Secondly, pupils have better pronunciation than those who started to learning foreign language at secondary school. After primary school, most of pupil’s tongues are already adjusted to fixed with their first language. So it is hard to start learning different pronunciations. For instance, in school, younger English teachers have has better pronunciation than elder teachers. It is because, in Korea, learning English from very young age was very rare before the 1990s. However, young adults can easily start to learning English from kindergarten before they complete their country’s language. Consequently, beginning a foreign language at primary school is beneficial take a lot of advantages when it comes to pronunciation.
To sum up, younger students feel that it is easy to start learning foreign language and they will have a great pronunciation in future. For these reasons, I think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of learning new language earlier.
Score: 6 Comment: 주로 글 안에 있는 코멘트나 수정을 봐주시면 될 것 같습니다. 단점에 대해서도 조금 mention를 해서 어떻게 advantages가 더 outweigh 하는 reasoning을 강화시켜주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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