▶ Your Answer :
the given diagram illustrates the process of
making cement by using some equipment and how to produce concrete using from pure cement
for using in building industries.
In brief, what stands out from the diagram is
that there are major 5 steps with a subsidiary step for producing concrete. Also the production of cement and concrete undertake with the mixing two
materials such as limestone and clay, ends up the mixing with the cement and the
rest of crucial materials for making concrete. 시멘트 제작과 콘크리트 제작이 두 재료를 섞는 것이라고 해석돼요. 시멘트를 만드는 과정이 이러이러하고, 이렇게 만들어진 시멘트가 콘크리트를 만드는 데 사용되니까 콘크리트를 만드는 공정에 앞서 시멘트를 만드는 공정이 선행된다고 설명하는 게 더 자연스러울 것 같아요
In more details, to begin with the powder is was made through the crusher with limestone and clay then it is put to in the mixer first. In the following stage, the mixed powder is moved into the rotating heater with extra
heating systems and it turns turned into the solid matter solution of cement. After that, the solid those
solution was formed to cement is ground through the grinder then it to be packed into huge bags. 'grinder'로 갈려면 용액이 아니라 고체일테니 solution이 아니라 solid matter가 적절하겠습니다.
In the sequences stage, the production of
concrete, was contained with the 15 percent of cement, 10 percent of water, 25
percent of sand and 50 percent of small stones are needed. , which The mixtures are put into the concrete mixer for mixing together to be concrete.
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