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The bar graph depicts the volumes and percentage changes in crime offences
in England and Wales from July 2013 to June 2015.
Overall, the total fraud offences increased in volumes and percentages
within a year. Violence against the person was recorded the highest crime
offences while the sexual offences had changed in huge
volumes. Meanwhile, theft, robbery and vehicle offences were reducing in its
number and percentage changes in its crime.
There was a huge number of offenders of well over 500,000 in June 2014 to
about 760,000 in June 2015 for violence against the person with the percentage changes
of +25%. The sexual offences recorded the largest an increase of 41% with the
lowest number of offences of below 250,000 for both consecutive years.
In contrast, theft, robbery and vehicle offences experienced a reduction
in its number of offenders as well as the percentage changes by 13%, 11% and
3%, respectively. The number of offences for those crimes was showing a similar
number for theft and robbery were similar of close to 50,000 for both years whereas vehicle
offences recorded at about 270,000 in June 2014 to 260,000 in June 2015.<(260,000~270,000 라고 하기에는 250,000 와 500,000 중간에 도달을 했기 때문에 370,000 정도가 더 정확한 것 같습니다)
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