▶ Your Answer :
Given are the bar charts which illustrate the climate
information in Cape Town and Upington, in South Africa.
Overall, the trends are reversed as the high season of
rainfall in Cape Town is during June until August, while rain season occurs
around January to March in Upington. The dramatic changes in weather throughout a year
happen regularly in Upington, whereas the weather changes less is less swing in Cape Town.
Starting with 25°C in January, the temperature in Upington
rockets to a the peak at 38°C in March, while when the amount of rainfall is peaked as
well at 190 mm. Few months later, the average temperature and precipitation
level drop noticeably to 10°C and 50 mm in May, declining to the lowest point at
3°C and 5 mm in July. The gradual rise of temperature and rainfall happens in
August to October, then the figure increases to 85 mm of rainfall and 18°C in November and
December.
In Cape Town Upington, there is a stable state in the first
trimester as the figure is quite the same at 3°C and 10 mm. A slight increase
can be found in April to June by a 7 centigrade difference. Consequently, the
figure reached is fluctuated approximately 8°C and 80 mm from June to August, which is the
peak period of rainfall and temperature. The temperature starts to drop again
in September to the lowest point in November at 1°C.
Score: 7 Comment: 정보를 잘 전달해주셨습니다. Minimum/maximum point에 대해서도 전달은 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. Silly mistakes와 collocation에 주의 해주시기를 바랍니다. #C라고 전달을 해주시면 Celsius라는 점을 전달을 해주지 않습니다. 꼭 degrees Celsius라고 해주시거나 °를 추가해주시기를 바랍니다. 그 외에는 비교를 조금 더 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다! |