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It is undeniable that our neighborhood has become more quiet nowadays since most people living within the community no longer know each other well. There is one good reason for this phenomenon, however, this issue can still be resolved.
Over the past few years, the quality of relationships of people living in a certain area has dramatically dwindle. This is mainly due to increasing tendency of many individuals to move from one place to another as well as the prevalence of social media. As people migrate, they have less opportunity to build long and strong relationships with others around them. Furthermore, more and more young adults nowadays greatly depend on social media for communication. A personal example of this issue would be the fact that I used to go out to meet my friend who lived next village, ('SNS 사용 이전에는' 등의 전제를 넣어주세요.) however, after we started using a social network service like Facebook, I no longer needed to visit him as I could easily see his daily life by checking his posts through online.
Nevertheless, these problems could be mitigated with enough efforts by the local committee and the homeowner association. First of all, local authorities should strive hard for raising the mood of more interaction by taking action as much as they could. For instance, throwing their own local event like a second-hand sale gives an opportunity for residents to socialize each other. Moreover, the homeowner association could also help it by holding a regular meeting to not only manage their residential facilities but also encourage more conversation. As a result, the problem can be substantially alleviated because people from the same community will rather would be able to quickly get to know their own neighbors. (이 문단은 내용상 살짝 수정이 필요한데, 자세한 건 총평에서 설명드리겠습니다)
In conclusion, I would argue that it is the local authorities’ responsibility to tackle this issue and they should begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above.
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