■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM WRITING ANSWER BOOKLET Candidate Name:텍스트 | Candidate Number:텍스트 | Centre Number:텍스트1 | Date:텍스트1 |
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Topic ▼ The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? |
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Your Answer ▼
It is said that exhaust fumes from automobiles are the main reason
for air pollution. Thus, some firmly believe that imposing a fee can deal with
air contamination. Nevertheless, there is an issue of how to levy a fine for a
long time. Therefore, I partly agree with the opinion that the government
should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during rush hour to
reduce air pollution. Two reasons will be presented below one by one.
On the one hand, the first reason for air contamination is certainly
some materials from the car. According to a survey, most of the scientists
chose exhaust gas as the main reason, thinking that only the government could
control the number of exhaust fumes. However, it is difficult to require operators
not to drive their cars voluntarily without a fine. It is because using public
transportation takes a long time to arrive at their work and is uncomfortable
when compared with driving.
On the other hand, it is unequal to charging a fee-only during rush
hour. All vehicles emit the same amount of exhaust gas irrespective of a time
slot. Also, there are many cars on roads as the rush hour on weekends. Thus,
drivers who usually use their automobiles during the rush hour will feel
uneasiness and criticize the policy. For example, in Korea, the administration levied
a fine on drivers who operate during rush hour. As a result, they faced many
criticisms and changed their policy.
To sum up, making drivers pay a fee is a good idea
to reduce air pollution. But, if it is applied only during rush hour, that causes
the problem of equality. |
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EXAMINER’S USE ONLY | Total Score: /9 | Examiner: | | TR (Task Response) | CC (Coherence and Cohesion) | LR (Lexical Resource) | GRA (Grammatical Range and Accuracy) | Score | /9 | /9 | /9 | /9 |
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6.5가 목표입니다. 40분 걸렸습니다!! 항상 감사드려요!! 278단어입니다!