■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
It has suggested that a variety of sports club is helpful for people to develop the ability to public health. However, other state that this would be have little impact on public health, and people should be needed for measurement.
To begin with, scores of people may have various opportunities in caring health through sports centres. This may be true that a wide range of facilities may generate an effect that a myriad of people are able to work out and sustain physical abilities with interested sports. Besides, They may savor diverse experiences or spend enjoyable time in the company of friends.
On the other hand, there are against these arguments that people have barely an influence on a good outcome with varied sports centre. Here is a hypothetical example, in Korea, there are a spate of health club, while a handful of people go on exercise. Although having good circumstances, there may be unchanged for public health and people may demand for measurements to inspect for physical status.
Personally, I think that there are pros and cons on these arguments. The environments with sports facilities such as health club, swimming poop, judo, golf and etc may bring about effective results for people who are eager to play sports, whereas in the absence of these facilities, there may be nothing to alleviate strains, or even having fun.
In conclusion, I cannot judge that the most paramount selections to build a number of facilities for public health. However, without having nothing is less than something
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제이님 덕분에 task2는 점점 틀이 갖춰지는 느낌이 드네요. 최대한 단락 4개로 3줄이상씩 쓰려고 노력하는데요. 아이디어가 계속 생각나지 않아서 단락을 늘려서 했던말 자꾸 반복하게 되네요! 최대한 파라프레이즈 해보려고 노력했는데 자꾸 잘안되네요 ㅜㅜ 연습이 더 필요한거 같아요 항상 쓰기전에 앞으로 이렇게 써봐야겠다고 생각하면서 쓰는데 막상 쓰게되면 잘 이렇게 되네요 ㅎㅎ ㅜ
질문. 토플과는 다르게 아이엘츠 라이팅 task1 and 2 템플릿이 도움이 많이 되는지 궁금합니다? (점수에 영향이 있을까요?)