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These days, importance
of higher education is increasing in accordance with becoming more complex society.
Some people maintain that entering a university is a good choice for someone’s better
future and success in life. I generally agree with this opinion and I will
discuss the reason why below.
First of all, as
globalizing is more widen and deepen over the whole world, the amount of
knowledge and information have exponentially risen exponentially. We need to learn them systemically
because these kinds of information are very different and are connected with each
other. Someone who enters a university student can study about his favorite subjects
for four years step by step. In my experience, when I was a university
student, diverse professors taught and guided me very effectively according to my
learning habits >> learining habits? . Through it, my understating about the world around us could be
broaden and expanded.
Some people may
believe that university the tuition fee of university is too expensive and university’s the policy or implementation
becomes like such as a private enterprise more and more. A few people explain no use of
learning in a university, exemplifying excellent successor >> 무슨 말인가요? like >> such as 뒤에 풀네임 써주세요 Gates and Jobs,
who are dropped outs of learning at their university. I think, however, the cases like
Gates and Jobs are really a minority of instances. They are gifted persons, so opinions
that claim on uselessness of entering a university are not enough to persuade to
normal people. They are exceptions.
In conclusion, I
strongly believe that studying in universities is needed for almost people to
succeed in their own departments. Therefore, it is a good idea that governments
support the poor who want to learn more. I think supporting and investing on
higher education is a right role for the government. Entering a university can give
diverse opportunities to us, such as learning efficiently and systemically about the world efficiently and
systemically. 동사를 수식해주는 부사는 동사 뒤에 들어갑니다 또한 다른 문법적 오류가 있었고 논리상 맞지 않거나 애매한 부분들이 본문에 있었습니다 다시 한 번 살펴봐주시길 바랍니다
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