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The table chart below shows that the people`s tendency of the expenditure for in purchasing various items in the five European countries(Where, where, where, where, and where) in 2002.
It is clear that the most frequent spending was for buying a food, drinks, 세개 이상 나열에서 마지막 and/or 앞엔 콤마입니다 and tobacco, whereas the percentage of leisure and education recorded the lowest. >> 오버뷰는 같은 본론입니다 문단 나눠주는거 아닙니다 명심해주세요 In the 2002, The Turkish people responded that they mostly spent their income for having a food, drinks, >> 위와 마찬가지입니다 and tobacco rather than other substantial goods. Compared to Turkish, the similar number of Irish people considered those same things as a major items,>> 콤마 빼주세요 at 28.91>> just under 29 percent 라고 해주는게 더 어휘력이 좋아 보입니다 per cent. People live in Italy seemed to have more interests about in clothing and foot wear than other countries` people. For the figure >> which figure ?, Turkish people more invested more money to enjoy pastime and to educate than other people,>> 콤마 빼주세요 at 4.35 per cent.
In conclusion, for those countries` inhabitants, the main expenditure was for food, drinks and tobacco. However, they least expend the least for having education and enjoying leisure.
숫자를 너무 자세하게 써도 좋지 않습니다 위에 써드린대로 다양한 표현이 더욱 좋구요 drinks and tobacco는 food 과 drink 사이에 콤마가 있는걸 봐선 다른 그룹이라고 보여지는데 필히 콤마 넣어주세요 다양한 문장, 단어를 구성하려는 노력이 보였습니다
Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
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