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As
the time passed and as the economy stabilized stablized, the old buildings and infrastructures
became obsolete, and usually are located in many old city areas which may
create a bad image. If the whole cities are rebuilt and redesigned, it could have
a new modernised stylish look. Despite those advantages, the historical values
for the old cities are valuable worth more than the modernised look. Therefore, old
cities must be preserved.
As
the city gets debilitated, there will be having the bad image of cities for
dirty and old styles. If those cities
are rebuilt from the scratch, the cities can have stylish modernised styles and
that can attract more tourists. In the case of New York, which have becoming
the fashionable and with youth streets for the stylish and modernised image of the
city, attracts more than 50 million tourists a year and became one of the most
popular places to visit in the world.
Therefore, the cities would be beneficial to had a trendy style to
attract more tourists when it is redesigned.
Despite
all these advantages, its disadvantages are phenomenal impacts. Rebuilding and
redesigning can mean that the old structures will be demolished and, this will
cause the disappearance of old historical values. Since there are increasing
the trends for seeking the historical and cultural value of tourist
attractions, the preservation of such structures would be helpful. In Tthe case
of Beijing and Athens can be the great example for this. Therefore, there will
be no cultural and historical values for the country if the old cities are not
existed.
In
conclusion, having the modernised styles can attract many people, particularly
tourists. However those styles become obsolete as time passes passed by. Since the
venerable cities are the form of historical value and it contains the cultural
value of the country, the preservation of own culture is more important than
that of the reconstruction of the modernised styles.
IELTS 1-9 score scale score: 7 good user
old cities를 허물었을 때와 보존했을 때 장단점을 나눠서 잘 쓰셨어요. 다양한 단어와 문법구조를 더 많이 사용해보는 것도 좋을 것 같아요. 수고하셨습니다! 아이엘츠 라이팅 채점기준 참고하세요 - TA/TR(Task Achievement/Task Response) 문제에 정확히 답변, 적정 분량 - CC(Coherence and Cohesion) 일관성, 응집성 - LR(Lexical Resource) 다양한 어휘표현
- GR(Grammartical Range and Accuracy) 문법 다양성, 정확성 |